What an interesting story to start the introduction of a persuasive essay on abortion? I'm doing a persuasive essay to be cons (ProLife) abortion and I want my introduction to be "catchy". My thesis is as follows:
Abortion is the choice of someone, even though in my opinion, wrong. After obtaining an abortion, your chances of contracting infections and diseases increase. Rape is not an excuse to get an abortion because there are methods to prevent someone from getting conceived after rape. There are also many different methods of abortion cruel depending on your point of pregnany.
Help please?!
I think your argument is ill-conceived and poorly documented. First of all, your chances of disease does NOT increase. There is some risk of infection, but did you know that having an abortion is actually a lot safer than giving birth? After the rape, yes the morning after pill is available, but you've been raped? Most women do not report the rape and if they do, they usually do not do so within 120 hours after sex you can take the morning after pill. Even if they take the morning after pill is not 100% effective!
Strictly in terms of your writing: do not start by saying that it's just your opinion - it back with something concrete. Re: infection and disease, and these increases also after delivery if the argument is unsound. The argument rape is also quite low, because many girls are too traumatized after a rape to think very clearly. View the sources and details on the "cruelty" angle
again because it is easily refuted.
Try to do research, because if you try to make a strong point, you should have some facts to back up your argument. There is a ProLife million websites out there and start reading.
Prohibition of abortion:
Provide hangers an alley near you!
Go to a safe "Everyone deserves a chance at life."
Posted on February 20, 2010.